Write a paragraph (in about 100 words) on A Days Outing you enjoyed.You may use the following point:[Introduction-Occasion-Companions-place-Sights and Sounds-your feeling activities-conclusion.]

On the day of republican anniversary, we have not gone to school. Therefore, all our colonial friends and guardians decided to go to the zoo after passing the flag of our school. We booked a minivan and about 20 of us started going to the Neer zoo in Hyderabad on a picnic. In the zoo, I booked an electric car separately so that I could easily explore each zoo. We saw white tiger, Bengal tiger, some bears, giraffes, turtles, and reptiles, there are various kinds of birds, ostriches, pelicans, and elephants. I also participated in a lion hunting event and saw many lions outdoors. After getting on we all sat in the garden and enjoyed the lunch pack. Then we returned to our van on the night it was closed. This is an unforgettable picnic, we all have a lot of fun.

At school, we learn to obey the rules. Good writing means introductory, three solid sentences and conclusions. We always click on our words (sometimes by expanding our sentences) and avoid fragment fragmentation. Ann said that it was time to break these rules. To learn more about grammar and storytelling, please read pages 89-137 of "Everybody Writes". Or check our videos in the second and third part of Anne's book. Please remember the next week's tips on your responsibilities as a publisher and check last week's post on top lighting ideas.

Write down about 100 words of your introduction. Please show me the three points you do in this paper. With this number of words, your paper will appear in the form of five articles. If there are more or fewer paragraphs needed to prove your point of view, adjust the number of words in each paragraph accordingly. In this space, write your sentences to draw readers' attention, publish your thesis and summarize what you will be doing. Discuss the broader impact of the problem and tie it to the reader. Please list the points of each paper and the evidence supporting them. They should be directly related to your paper. In addition, transition words are used, but you can also improve the flow of sentences within and between paragraphs. Please write each paragraph in about 150 words. Provide further evidence that some support can be used with an additional 100 words where the body needs to detail the point further. Your total word count should be around 600.