11: 58 minutes. In the darkness, the bright red number of the alarm clock stared at him. The air conditioner gently rotated, my leg muscles jerked. The pillow was thin and the head was deflating. The moonlight shines through the blinds and shines in an empty vodka bottle at the foot of the bed. He pierces his tongue along his tongue and feels the spirit blur. He breathed out and his fingers licked his temple. He was drunk, but as a sour aftertaste which kept him awake, memories remained above him.
More importantly, the personality of "When I left" is related. A young father loves his son, a jealous teenager, he misses his father, his mother fails to love relationship, love his memory of old sick people. With Zoehler 's easy - to - read tone and first - person narrative structure, each of these elements will help to tell a good story. For that part, this is not a problem. Indeed, a 28 - year - old child tells a story. But, if the first person's story like "When did you go" is not clearly marked as a novel like a book store, a short story anthology, or an online writing journal, we are having problems now Is it?
The 91-year-old gas has gained literary respect for his spiritual and elaborate novel for decades; among his new collection short-story enthusiasts are attracted prose and absurd, persuasive For example, an interview with the piano when shooting "Casablanca". First sentence: "When someone announces that she is pregnant, she throws a few questions: What is soft cheese, why can not you eat it? You miss the wine Can you do it not only to not sit on the subway but to keep me a nice person (no) Do you worry that it suddenly looks like an alien? Do you want to miss Sushi? Of course you want a boy or a girl? "
After reading this story many times, I began to notice that the first sentence predicted the entire story, it gives you a wonderful memory of Ireneo Funes, and his memory can not be compared with the memory of other men I will tell you the reason. In order to understand it, we need to read this story at least once and understand the plot. This is the first sentence as I wrote in English. Looking at the sentence in parenthesis, "I have no right to say this sacred verb, only one on Earth has this right, he is dead" Who pronounces the holy verb The idea of having the power to do. Of course, we learned that this person is Funes later. Then Borges said that this guy has a passionate flower, because he has a wonderful memory to be able to see the flowers in great detail, he said "he saw it before I will see it so that I have never done it. " All parts, all the petals, all colors, he will always remember those details