PLEASE.If you're an expert at writing essays.Please HELP. i'll give you 10 points for life?

I have not asked anyone to do a lot of things, but please ... Please help me change what I need to change. If you need to rewrite, please rewrite this for me. If it is necessary to rewrite this, one of 1, 2, 3, 4 is required. It really helps with the current score distribution, so 3 or 4 is really necessary. Please write a lot ... If you need to rewrite, please change what you need. Please rewrite. This is the gauge score, I will get 1, 2, 3 or 4

Please tell the story about learning important things from your friends as you become "coincident" friends. In your answer, please explain how friendship is created and how this friendship teaches you.

When I was twelve years old, I was riding a bicycle near cold in January. I do not know where I will go, so I met most of the other girls of my age wearing eyeglasses, short brown hair, and striped red shirt. She shouted with sorrow and a mean savage tone. A few seconds later, the girl burst into tears and nodded. I asked what was the problem, "I lost my dog, I can not find him anywhere, I put a poster around my neighbors."

When I asked her to help me post more posters, I hesitated because I went to the party. I said, "Well, I'm sorry, I have to stay somewhere, but I wish you good luck to find your dog," she said. Ten minutes later, I began to think that this girl was very bad and began to think, "Should I help her?" I really want to go to this one street party, but I turned to her house and tried to decide. What should I do? Then on her neighbor, I saw a little blonde black yoke on a girls' flyer, along the dog's explanation. It was running when I walked to it, but I picked it up. When I continued walking, I found the girl and said, "Is this yours?" When she shouted, "She is sloppy", Joy covered his face. She thanked me for two hours until the child was over, so I invited her to go over and join me. That day, I learned the lesson and made new friends in my life. I learned that if I do not want to turn around to help her find a dog, I do not think that it is embarrassing. That's right. I also learned that helping someone is more important than thinking about yourself.

"It is useful to make yourself very bad, I say that you need to create 5 to 10 pages anyway, you can trim them the next morning, if necessary If you write or split 5 pages you will not lose.

I was not reading ... You were messed up by a writer. Yes, all rules usually have exceptions - I will admit - but reading will help shape the voices of your writing to help you shape your writing. If there is nothing else, it will motivate you to write. If you think that it is BS, let 's go get a copy of Stephen King' s written: Craft memoirs (I know that this book can be recommended over and over again, but it is wonderful is). When you create a reading list, you will be forced to read your life. It is a good habit to obey other writers. It is like yourself and the people surrounding your success, and I hope to make it even more successful. Other writers can help you get into the writing community that shows you how other writers deal with blank pages and how they adapt to writing their lives I will. It will also provide you a platform for talking to other writers (and sharing your experience) ... and this is just the beginning

Practice writing is difficult. I am not alone. Many people helped me. You may not have someone you trust to help you write. So I am going to commit to the world: If you promise to write at least one blog every week, I promise you to personally improve and improve each article. If you are interested please email me