Personal Narrative- Mountain Hike

Personal story - mountain hiking, simply while in hiking in life, selective, such as success during the pain, pride and safety, it is a story of such a choice. Last summer I attended Philmont 's Scout Lunch at the Rayado project. Super black death day, seven mountain hiking: trekking on the eighth day is the biggest challenge for my crew. 16:00, we conquered most of the mountain. As we climb, we think our sixth peak Big Red, storm hit. When we struggled in the mountains, it was cold rain which froze us.

"Hiking" is not a major term, as it does not have a complete concept. Climbing the mountain, what? What's wrong? Who is the hike? Where is the subject of the sentence? Where is the verb? -> "Hiking on foot, the sunset looked beautiful." Or: "I am hiking in the mountains." Please be careful, I think that hiking is a verb, but it is not so, like a verb Since it is never isolated, we need another verb to help it.The sentence fragment is part of the sentence which needs to be added to the main sentence as it is not per se itself.In many cases I think that the fragment of the sentence is bad, but if it is used correctly it will actually be a best friend of the writer.If trying to use fragments of the sentence alone without the main clause will cause problems, The teacher puts a big red mark on your paper: Fragment! But do not be fooled, but if you add this snippet to the main section you will get a good sentence.

Personal story - mountain hiking, simply while in hiking in life, selective, such as success during the pain, pride and safety, it is a story of such a choice. Last summer I attended Philmont 's Scout Lunch at the Rayado project. Super black death day, seven mountain hiking: trekking on the eighth day is the biggest challenge for my crew. 16:00, we conquered most of the mountain. As we climb, we think our sixth peak Big Red, storm hit. When we struggled in the mountains, it was cold rain which froze us.