KSDE 6-TRAIT Scoring Manual 117 Appendices Revised November 2009

Performance category: AW = academic warning, AS = close to standard, MS = compliant, ES = standard exceeded, EX = example

Performance category: AW = academic warning, AS = close to standard, MS = compliant, ES = standard exceeded, EX = example

This article has at least 4 pages, must be carefully created and presented in MLA format. A copy of the seminar in this article expires on November 6. The seminar will be held on November 8th. The revised draft expires on November 17th. As well as other tasks, let's meet us at any stage of the writing process. Technical chapters in "The world is text" are important chapters for our students as they can say that they belong to people who will naturally achieve technological progress. iPod, mobile phones, portable DVD players, PDAs, and computers have been part of their lives since its founding. I think that the year of the birth of a typical first grader in 2006 was 1988. Annual digital mobile phone, Doppler radar and HDTV debuted. In the year I was born, Mr. potato head was invented. Talk about generational disparity

As a class, get an example and connect it to the gauge. We will collaborate to identify specific elements that need to be changed to improve the score (within function or between functions). Work on the students to work together to fix the paradigm to improve it (within the characteristics and features). Then ask the students to step through the content that needs to be included in this particular prompt. Now show the sample articles to the students and highlight the content that matches the list of desired content for the students. Students need to modify their lists as necessary. Make students identify missing content compared to desired content. Extension: Let the students fix the examples to include missing content, if any. Consider using multiple prompts and examples to perform this activity in a multi-day process.

• Revisions: Students revise the second draft using teacher feedback and pay attention to each function and all comments. Students correct all normal mistakes that are pointed out and answer other suggestions. This is more than just proofreading practice, and students should make thorough modifications. Scoring Guide helps with specific revision proposals. The story tells the true story about the fun and fun things you do in the summer afternoon. "Adventure" can be a new experience with several tasks. You, yourself, please tell the truth about the adventure with your family and friends. Please tell us the real time of events and events you want to remember. Have you made someone happy - or do you surprise someone? Tell the truth about when your actions have a positive impact on others