You wrote the first draft. Once this important milestone is completed, I would like someone to read your story.
This means that you need to pick up your first draft and tell a better story. One way to convey a better story is to evaluate the story when performing a story edit.
This is the big turning point that happened before the midpoint of the first act. Please be aware that it is not necessarily the first event of your story.
Dramatic changes can be positive or negative, so you should give a goal that can not be refused by the hero
Let your hero create a conscious and unconscious desire to shine your captive events.
I encourage you to write your stimulus as a summary of background stories and stories, not as a dramatic scene. This allows the reader to experience the activity at the same time as the hero, increasing the possibility of making the reader feel better.
The turbulence phenomenon may occur in the main character or it may be caused by the hero. As an artist, you can decide oneself the best for you.
Gone Girl: Nick went home and found his wife missing. (External goal - Find a wife Internal goal - Make wife depart from your life)
Mars: Mark Watney disappeared during Mars' storm. His teammate could not find him, I thought he was dead, and made the earth evacuate.
Philosopher's stone: Harry Potter received a letter from Hogwarts, his uncle did not let him possess it
The story has been around since 2000 years ago. It is not a formalization but a proven form that keeps attracting readers. Story, imagination is unique to you
It is the secret of an excellent story to grasp how to make a story and to arrange important events by using tools that you can use, such as storyline to maximize satisfaction with reading. So, what is a good story? This is the story that others would like to read.
The instigation of incitement exists in the arc of a complete story. If the top 15% of your novel has no stimulus, you need a strong reason to postpone it. The reader is hoping to cause the hero to take action. If delaying the turbulence event, add a submap that fascinates the reader.
This is an example of Fictionary's story. The brown line shows the arc of the recommended story and the green line shows the arc of the actual story of the novel.
You can see above, the inciting event was too late. Writer loses a boring reader
Until the climax is too late, I do not have enough time to reach a satisfactory solution. This means that the reader will not read the author's next book.
We will introduce other important events such as Love Node 1, Midpoint, Love Node 2, future blogging climax etc.
I think that one thing I like is to become a popular style. Or are there any stimuli for your stimulation? In my story, the fallen people came down to the backyard of this girl's family. I asked, "Why do I have to put it on page 17? Let's put it on page 5. There is no need to see everyday life to understand who they are. Let's post on page 5 as soon as possible "Scott: This is a trend. Compression is necessary especially in setting the story. Looking at the movies of the '80s, it seems that it is eternal, like when I first entered the movie. The past is the end of the first act, now it is the middle of the first act, and the past is the middle of the first act.
The instigation of incitement exists in the arc of a complete story. If the top 15% of your novel has no stimulus, you need a strong reason to postpone it. The reader is hoping to cause the hero to take action. If delaying the turbulence event, add a submap that fascinates the reader.
I like to think about instigating as a question: Do you want to enter this story world? It can be asked by others. It can be an act of God. For the hero, it may be very internal. Excitement is usually the first and most uncommon thing to happen in stories. The main climax is sometimes called the dark night of the soul. If you are not writing a tragedy your heroes are the darkest. Everything seems to have been lost. The reader is turning over the page, just like a crazy person trying to figure out if the character gets over the storm. This is a trench that your hero would have to climb. If you are writing a tragedy, this will be a big victory for your character - you will remove their height from them