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My favorite vacation is Hawaii. I was moved by this trip. I traveled with my mother for the first time alone. We stayed there from 8th December to 15th December 2017. First, I went to Pearl Harbor. When we went there, the day before was the 75th anniversary of Pearl Harbor attack. So, I want to go there. I will not change the history of war, but I must know what to do. Before I got there I studied the Pacific War and attacked Pearl Harbor. Also, I read a book about it. Next, I ran the entire Honolulu marathon. I often ran it. At that time, I ran by myself. But this time, I ran with my mother. Last year my mother was 50 years old. She said, "When I was 50 I thought I'd like to join the Honolulu Hull Marathon." She runs about 10 kilometers a day. I am part-time at a sports gym, so I am doing sports and running. The full marathon starts at 5 AM. We are always running. After 6 hours, we have run out. It's too tiring, I am short of physical strength, but it feels good. I gave a couple of big gold medals and snacks. As I was running, we saw beautiful mountains and beaches. Because the weather is nice, you can watch great scenery. It is also very hot, we are soaked. Thirdly, we often go hiking. We climbed five mountains. I also climbed after I finished the full marathon. My legs did not move as I thought, but it was a good recovery. The harshest hiking trip is Coco Head. This is a straight line, it is a steep slope. Sometimes we climb a mountain with our hands. It is very difficult to climb. When I arrived at the top of the mountain, I saw a beautiful view. I will never forget this view. Finally, I ate a lot of food. I always go to Konakafe. Is delicious. Then I ate desserts like Acai bowl and pancake. This is also a good taste. In short, this holiday is very lucky and attractive.

The first time I traveled abroad was when I was 8 years old when I went to Jamaica on vacation with my family. The holiday I spent with my family lived in a very nice hotel every time. The most luxurious thing is that I went to Hawaii during my spring vacation when I was sixteen. We stayed at Presidential Suite on the top floor, we could see the sea bay windows, the living room, the dining room and the large screen tv of each bedroom. You never have to say no. As their parents can not afford it, most children can not go to their chosen university. Because their parents can not afford it, they can not go to the summer camp they want. They are too expensive so they can not play musical instruments. In a 1% environment this is not the case. If you want to do something and you have the right to do so, you can do it

My favorite vacation is Hawaii. I was moved by this trip. I traveled with my mother for the first time alone. We stayed there from 8th December to 15th December 2017. First, I went to Pearl Harbor. When we went there, the day before was the 75th anniversary of Pearl Harbor attack. So, I want to go there. I will not change the history of war, but I must know what to do. Before I got there I studied the Pacific War and attacked Pearl Harbor. Also, I read a book about it. Next, I ran the entire Honolulu marathon. I often ran it. At that time, I ran by myself. But this time, I ran with my mother. Last year my mother was 50 years old. She said, "I wanted to join the Honolulu Hull Marathon when I was 50 years old." She runs about 10 kilometers a day. I am part-time at a sports gym, so I am doing sports and running. The full marathon starts at 5 AM. We are always running. Very good taste

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