When the nurse finally let Adam enter Mia 's ward, he turned on headphones; and in her ears. Mia heard from Beethoven's 3rd drama from the injured body and ran to her room. When she saw Adam seeing her body, she thought she could work as hard as he could. Mia noticed that she is basically a ghost. Nobody can hear her voice. Nobody can meet her. Except for the injured, no one thinks she is here
Mia hurriedly fell down on the ground and wept. When she listened to music, she looked up and saw Adam take notes. He told Mia that he entered her house after hearing that she had caused the accident and found Julia's letter by post. When he opened the letter, Mia began to cry again (although he could not feel it) he put his hand in his hand. Then he began to cry looking. Adam took Mia 's hand and said. "You got it, you went to Mia.You did it.If you stay, I will leave the band.I will go to New York with you. I will stay
Mia saw him, she saw only white light. She felt her hands only to Adam. She squeezed it when she saw it was his hand. Adam opened saying she opened her eyes, "Mia?"
Climax is the choice of Mia between life and death. Mia can choose to live in Julia including Adam, Kim, Grams, Gramps, Willow, Henry, Newborn. Or, she can choose to let go of everything and perhaps see her mother, dad and brotherly teddy in their postmortem world
Climax - The climax is a turning point. At the climax, the hero changed his fate. If this is a comedy, the performance of the hero is not smooth before the climax, but things will happen after the climax. If this is a tragedy, the reverse is true. The main character is getting worse. The climax is the highest point of the arc. Zach discovered that a person releases cortisol during ascent and releases oxytocin at high tide If they sympathize with the hero, people will release dopamine if there is a happy end. Please read these story clips and react chemically with your brain so please wait for a while (see the photo at the top of the post).
Every good short story planning an emotional climax has a broken moment, and the hero reaches an emotional climax. Climax usually occurs in the latter part of the story or near the end of the story. At the top of the story, the hero may be overwhelmed, feeling troubled, desperate, even even as uncontrollable. Please think about the endings of twists and surprises. The end of brainstorming will surprise the reader, shock, or curious. Avoid obvious terminations, and the reader can guess the end before it finishes. Give the reader a false sense of security, they think they know how the story ends, then turn attention to another character or image that shocks them.