Can you help me on this essay?

I have to write convincing articles for my English teacher. She said that we can take it home for homework, but I do not know when it will expire. The title says: idealists are people who want to pursue great ideas and change the world. Because their plans are often ambitious, these people may be harder to achieve smaller and more specific goals. In contrast, real people are focusing on viable ideas and goals. Their approach will help to provide concrete solutions even if these people can not imagine a great idea.

This is in the article section I wrote, but that alone is not enough. It sounds like it was written by a sixth grade student.

My dream is bigger than I am, it is not a reality. Of course, sometimes you have to be realistic, but dreamers may have a better impact on reality, so too realistic may destroy others' dreams. For example, I dream of starting a band one day, but in fact, I can not sing very well, I can not play any instruments (unless the triangles count). Therefore, in reality, it destroyed my dreams. Of course, as I discovered his facts, I am very depressed and it shows how negative the reality is.

If my advice does not help you, or if you do not agree, that is not a problem. In fact, if you do not agree, maybe you can help me learn more by commenting about your experience. If you are not ready to make a mistake or correct it, do not write it down. This means avoiding many political topics.

If you really want to help others when you are competent, you can ask questions and ask for constructive help. Many of them are questions I ask people to concentrate on our conversation. There are realistic checks on constructive feedback and innovation, but collaboration and encouragement make the possibility of abandoning all possible obstacles much higher. . I am very grateful to the people who helped me on this journey.

If you ask the question "What can I eat, drink / add to help lose weight?" You are in the wrong direction completely. The money needed to answer the next question is many orders of magnitude less than answering the first question.

There is no problem asking for help. In fact, where is the toilet? Do you think you can tell me where the bar is? This is my first experience and I do not have the best navigation skills. This will be responsible for answering the person you are talking about. Sometimes people will respond faster if you tell them a few small pieces about yourself before you ask them. Please think about the story closely related to your present situation and tell it. I waited five hours at the airport several days ago. I hope this flight will arrive on time today. If you are honest with your words and actions, your listeners will open your conversation in good faith.