I need help to edit descriptive paragraphs. I just want to know if there are any errors that need punctuation correction.
It is my grandmother that I always remember. She is a magical person I know. My grandmother is the one that everyone wants to be around and she always smiled on our face and I never even tried it. She laughs at the happiest and always jokes. That may be the reason we are always smiling! Regardless of the situation, my grandmother puts it in front of her, but she still helps us. She is very worried and always gives us a warm home; my cousin, I always like to live with her on weekends. My grandmother is like my best friend, I can talk to her about anything, she knows how to solve my problem. She also made the best turkey sauce and banana pudding, I always enter her house at Thanksgiving and I am looking forward to the smell of all the warm foods she is waiting for us . I always cherish all my memories with my grandmother. She is strong, caring, considerate, funny woman There are many things that can be given to others.
It is my grandmother that I always remember. She is a magical person I know. ==> Either "the wonderful person I know" or simply "a wonderful person".
My grandmother is the one that everyone wants to be around and she always smiled on our face and I never even tried it. ==> Everyone wants to stay around her.
She laughs at the happiest and always jokes. That might be the reason we always smile!
Regardless of the situation, even if she does not help us, anyone will put my grandmother before her.
She is very worried and always gives us a warm home; my cousin, I always like to live with her on weekends. ==> Most of this sentence is okay
My grandmother is like my best friend, I can talk to her about anything, she knows how to solve my problem. ==> That does not matter
She also made the best turkey sauce and banana pudding, I always enter her house at Thanksgiving and I am looking forward to the smell of all the warm foods she is waiting for us . ==> This should be two separate sentences
I always cherish all my memories with my grandmother. ==> There are two separate sentences
She is strong, caring, considerate, funny woman There are many things that can be given to others.
I do not know how this works for your entire application, but overall I think that the content is a little weak. You talked about how wonderful your grandmother is, but that does not really tell you who you are. Things to consider: My position on the relative writing of my English teacher is not enough if people reading it show a subconscious reaction as compared to my relatives.
I was always a collector. I believe for a long time that I say "someone's garbage is the wealth of another". When I went for a walk with my grandmother, she would have visited us for a long time. She can always find something that can not live without her. It is a very nice chair. A suitcase worn a little. Small bookshelf old birdcage. And it will continue. For her, these are wonderful treasures, she will be excited. She can not understand that someone abandons these cute things. These treasures make her happy, it wipes me
My favorite place was always my grandmother 's house. This is where I have to go around the school. I have always loved my grandmother 's house. There is always a taste of coffee in the air. My grandmother seems to be making coffee. As soon as you smell of coffee, I think about my grandmother 's house. My grandmother's house is always crowded with people. - The characteristics of the princess 's grandmother and George McDonald' s goblin woman was one of the most problematic subjects of literary tradition throughout history. A woman has both a model of virtue and an embodiment of evil. Ancient Greeks were afraid of women, and poets such as Hesiod believed that women were thought to be a tragedy of God and a tragedy of men (Fantham 39)